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May 08, 2026 3:53 pm
Did the shift from the claustrophobic closet in Chapter 1 to the corporate firing in Chapter 6 make sense? Did the timeline jumps feel natural? Was the paranoia visceral enough that you felt it as a reader?
What other questions do you have regarding this first act? Does the prose make you feel like you're reading something in fragments? Does it feel manic?
Can you compare and contrast the shift after the writer's block is lifted in Chapter 4?