Did the transition from the manic Nomad to the grounded husband feel earned? Does the ending provide the right amount of closure without feeling overly sanitized?

Did the pacing feel fast and chaotic, matching the manic state? Could you feel the contrast between my international highs and the heavy reality of what Mariam was facing back home?

Did the shift from the claustrophobic closet in Chapter 1 to the corporate firing in Chapter 6 make sense? Did the timeline jumps feel natural? Was the paranoia visceral enough that you felt it as a reader? What other questions do you have regarding this first act? Does the prose make you feel lik...

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Like the title says I'm Adam Abraham just finished my draft of Transmongolian and this is where I'm here to hear from you. What you have to say about about your own trials and how you overcame them. I like seeing results and I set goals. There won't be any recovery if you don't put an effort in. I d...