adam•er•all Forum - Recent Posts https://adamerall.com/community/ adam•er•all Discussion Board en-US Sat, 09 May 2026 12:57:38 +0000 wpForo 60 Act 3: The Redemption Era (The Tamed Operator) https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/act-3-the-redemption-era-the-tamed-operator/#post-5 Fri, 08 May 2026 15:55:30 +0000 Did the transition from the manic Nomad to the grounded husband feel earned? Does the ending provide the right amount of closure without feeling overly sanitized?

]]> adamerall https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/act-3-the-redemption-era-the-tamed-operator/#post-5 Act 2: The Nomadic Sprints (The Untethered Alter-Ego) https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/act-2-the-nomadic-sprints-the-untethered-alter-ego/#post-4 Fri, 08 May 2026 15:54:41 +0000 Did the pacing feel fast and chaotic, matching the manic state? Could you feel the contrast between my international highs and the heavy reality of what Mariam was facing back home?

]]> adamerall https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/act-2-the-nomadic-sprints-the-untethered-alter-ego/#post-4 Act 1: The Psychosis (The Collapse) https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/act-1-the-psychosis-the-collapse/#post-3 Fri, 08 May 2026 15:53:50 +0000 Did the shift from the claustrophobic closet in Chapter 1 to the corporate firing in Chapter 6 make sense? Did the timeline jumps feel natural? Was the paranoia visceral enough that you felt it as a reader?

What other questions do you have regarding this first act? Does the prose make you feel like you're reading something in fragments? Does it feel manic?

Can you compare and contrast the shift after the writer's block is lifted in Chapter 4?

]]> adamerall https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/act-1-the-psychosis-the-collapse/#post-3 Beta readers to request an Advance Copy https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/beta-readers-to-request-an-advance-copy/#post-2 Thu, 07 May 2026 06:27:01 +0000 Please send me a DM in order to facilitate the document that will be shared with you as an advanced copy. This Transmongolian Feedback channel is where you can provide whichever relevant/irrelevant feedback you may have.

]]> adamerall https://adamerall.com/community/main-forum/beta-readers-to-request-an-advance-copy/#post-2 Well this is Adam from adamerall and Transmongolian https://adamerall.com/community/introduce-yourself/well-this-is-adam-from-adamerall-and-transmongolian/#post-1 Thu, 07 May 2026 06:23:52 +0000 Like the title says I'm Adam Abraham just finished my draft of Transmongolian and this is where I'm here to hear from you. What you have to say about about your own trials and how you overcame them. I like seeing results and I set goals. There won't be any recovery if you don't put an effort in. I don't believe in being complacent and hold myself accountable.

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